"Here's where you'll live, kids. You did bring a lifetime supply of water? Yes? Gabby, gabby, talk-talk all trip and now you've nothing to say." |
On the topic of clunky exposition, Rollins writes:
"The bane to all fiction, no matter the genre, is called “info-dumping.” Whether it’s trying to fill in a character’s backstory or explaining the science behind quantum physics, never stop your story to lecture or teach. So how do you get that necessary information into the book without bringing your story to a grinding halt?
By remembering the adage: story = conflict. Information should be revealed to the readers through a variety of techniques: shared through an argument between characters, or perhaps teased out within the scope of an action scene, or left unresolved as a tool of suspense. Use that spoonful of sugar to help that medicine go down. And it works. After I wrote my novel Black Order, I received a flurry of emails stating “I never understood quantum mechanics until I read those three pages in your book.'"
Read more over at io9.
Image: mst3
No comments:
Post a Comment